tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639337551644802835.post7136143971286963024..comments2014-04-06T13:27:00.679+12:00Comments on Doris : My weekendPES Blogs Administratorhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17359536147314284796noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639337551644802835.post-56548576446722827042012-11-12T04:33:10.882+13:002012-11-12T04:33:10.882+13:00what mean BBQwhat mean BBQAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1639337551644802835.post-5369563751522055122012-06-27T16:34:30.475+12:002012-06-27T16:34:30.475+12:00Great paragraphing Doris! You tried really hard to...Great paragraphing Doris! You tried really hard to write paragraphs about one idea.<br />I think the paragraph about the BBQ could do with some full stops though.<br />Keep up the good work.Miss Gardenhttp://pesroom12and13.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.com