I am learning to write an introuduction that hooks in my audience.
Here are 3 versons.Which Monday Morning introuduction do you like best and why.

I don’t like getting up in the morning but my mum woke me for school and get change. I was so tired.

I don’t like getting up Monday morning because I was late last night .I was feeling tired last night because it takes long to finish our church.I nearly felt a sleep in the church.


Monday morning it hard to get up. I want to stay asleep in bed.

Chicken Olympics

Dora was black and she has a red cone up her head.
She has a yellow peak.

Chicken Olympics

Dora was black and a red cone up her head.She has a yellow peck.

Chicken Olympic

Chicken Olympics

Dora was black and she has a red cone on her head.
She has a yellow peak and small eyes.
Dora has a black tail.

Holiday

In the holiday my family and my church people went to Wirea pool.We went with a bus.When we got out the bus we went and change to our togs and go swim but I
like the slide the best. It was fun on the slide.

After me and my friends went to the big slide.


Doris

holiday

In the holiday my family and my church people went to Wirea pool.We went with a bus.When we got out the bus we went and change to our togs and go swim but I
like the slide the best. It was fun on the big slide.

After me and my friends went to the big slide.


Doris

Netbook Reflections

What I like about my net book is being able to write because if you make a mistake you can fix it.
The thing that I don’t like about my net book is drawing on tux paint because it makes loud noises.
I really want to use my net book because I don’t want to go back using pencils and books.
I like using my net book the best.
I like going on google because you can research and you can search for information.
The other thing that don’t like about my net book is shutting down and getting on.
By Doris Aukuso