Monday, February 20, 2012

I am learning to write an introuduction that hooks in my audience.
Here are 3 versons.Which Monday Morning introuduction do you like best and why.

I don’t like getting up in the morning but my mum woke me for school and get change. I was so tired.

I don’t like getting up Monday morning because I was late last night .I was feeling tired last night because it takes long to finish our church.I nearly felt a sleep in the church.

Monday morning it hard to get up. I want to stay asleep in bed.

1 comment:

  1. Hey Doris,

    WOW! What a neat second paragraph. I liked your second paragraph because you used interesting words.


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