Wednesday, June 27, 2012

My weekend

On Saturday I went to my auntys house we have'nt seen them for long and we had BBQ.
Me and my cousin was playing on the trampoline while we wait for the BBQ to really.

When the BBQ was really we went to eat after we have finished eating we went back outside and we play cricket with my cousin my dad and uncle joyed the game too.

Me and my cousin went inside to watch television while the boys and my dad,uncle play cricket outside.We were watching our favourite chanel 40 we watch so random.

Then my cousin said should we go play ball table and I said yes we went outside to the garage to play ball table.


  1. Great paragraphing Doris! You tried really hard to write paragraphs about one idea.
    I think the paragraph about the BBQ could do with some full stops though.
    Keep up the good work.


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